Got the good endings as the first one for each MC. At first I kinda hate Keir but he kept getting better and now I really like him and for Cirrus I didn't expect that scene at all it caught me off guard but his hotness is kinda off the chart so still love him tho. And, the fancy stranger I hope we will see more of him soon in the next chapter. Overall, this VN is fantastic I absolutely love it.
I got a bad ending and left it because there was so much story to the game. I was entranced by the writing though and the dynamics between the characters were written well. There was a lot descriptions on the settings it really helped me picture my surroundings. Nice Visual Novel! I hope to play the other ones!
I'm actually really enjoying this. From the choice of gender to the "Aftercare" zone and the addition of a safeword, this game was amazing to play especially since you provided a space to tab out if needed. I cannot wait for more instalments.
Aaaaaaaa it's so addicted!! I love Keir so much till I dreamed of him TvT I write the date of next update on my calendar so I can download it as fast as I can!! Keep the good work for this amazing masterpiece! I love u all developers!!!!
You know when you're in the mood for something and you can't quite place your finger on what but nothing you find is quite it? And you spend hours searching and find nothing? Yes well Obscura for me was that except I found Exactly what I was looking for. I am currently in the middle of the first love interest of my first playthrough and already had to stop just to sing my praises.
First of all, from the get-go the artstyle, music, and ambiance is absolutely stunning. The setting is this dark fantasy marketplace with religious undertones. I am looking forward to seeing the developments of the world.
The pacing and transitions of the story feel very natural as well. I feel like a lot of visual novel games, especially otome ones can be somewhat obvious in terms of like "THIS IS AN IMPORTANT CHOICE" where you can clearly tell when a choice is going to deviate the path one way or another. While this is sometimes helpful, I really love how natural the choices feel.
In a similar vein, as many people in these comments have mentioned, the MC is wonderful. I think they feel very natural and have realistic reactions to situations they are placed in. Again, many visual novel otome games can struggle with making likable and natural protagonists.
Finally, the progression of the relationships. Once again, just remarkably well-written and paced. Nice and slow, I like that they don't immediately start out in love with each other (I am a sucker for slower burns) and that the story takes time to build the relationships. I also love a bit of toxicity in fictional relationships so I look forward to seeing some darker themes throughout.
Basically, this is a stunningly beautiful and well-written game that honestly deserves better than being called an otome. And this is just how I feel after about an hour of playing. If you are a fan of dark fantasy, religious themes, slow burn, and romance than I really cannot recommend this game enough.
Edit upon finishing a few endings:
I very rarely try and achieve every single ending in a game the way I am trying to here. I think it really speaks to the quality of the game.
A few other notes, I really appreciate the various aftercare resources both in and out of game, especially in regards to Cirrus's route. (Although for personal preference I do find it somewhat immersion breaking but I understand the necessity for it for those that may need it, and it wasn't distracting enough to stop me from playing through his routes several times so I still consider it a good choice overall)
So far my only complaint is entirely in personal preference where honestly I think Cirrus's routes could go even darker but I'm an enjoyer of pretty dark fiction and understand it isn't for everyone. Just overall an amazing game with so much effort and creativity put into it. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.
I quite literally created an account just to type this (though I probably should have a lot sooner)- this game (even though it's only just released one chapter) was fantastic. I loved the way MC was presented as a character with clear traits and motivations. The world-building is beautiful- the plot premise is so interesting and unique. Honestly, this might be one of the best introductions to a game, in general, I've seen in a while- kudos to the writers, developers, artists, etc. because everything was executed great.
The aftercare section (spoilers about that I guess?) is something I'd even be using outside of the game- it felt so warm and comforting, and having the MC speak affirmations and break the 4th wall when I expected to be booted out of the game was quite frankly something I haven't seen before and really helped my panicking. I also realized even with ONE chapter how attached I grew to my MC. This was so considerate and kind- thank you so much for putting this in here because even if someone (like me) thinks they know what to expect sometimes taking a step back is better. This is one of the best games I've seen in a long time, absolutely fantastic I am so excited for what is to come <3
I'm very glad I found this. Loved both routes tho I'm a bit more intrigued by Cirrus' story. (Fancy stranger will probably end up being my favorite tho, I know what I like). I often crave darker games but they almost always tend to be a little *too* much for me, but this one is just perfect.
Almost forgot to add, but my favorite thing about this game so far is the MC. They're just delightful.
Can't wait to play the demo for the other love interests.
(Simp alert incoming-) Oh my gOD THIS WAS SUCH AN EXPERIENCE WHKRHKSHKSJS!!!!! The art is beautiful and the music fits perfectly without feeling out of place at all. The atmosphere is just so sick and I love the world and the way there's an option for a safeword and aftercare. Cirrus' route had me holding my breath, but KIER'S ROUTE??? Top tier. Spent the first five play throughs staring at his arms. Banter. Cool full face mask. Dried fruit. What more could you ask for?
ALSO Vesper?? MVP MC of all time. I loved their narrative voice and how they interacted with the other characters. Kinda wish I knew their name before I began the play through (so I could've given them their canon name) but at the same time, playing the MC as a different name than Vesper made them really feel like their own character? And that made the aftercare feel a lot more comforting somehow. Anyway! 10/10 game
I love MC for their humor, for how cute and talkative they are. Honestly, this has to be the best MC that I ever saw in any VN. Also simping so haaard for Mr. Thief, I need more of him so bad T_T Will be waiting patiently for more updates for as long as it needs, this game truly deserves all the wait!
Wow, loved it. Captivating writing, dynamic sprites, shadowy art, on point programming, wicked background music. Got Cirrus first - oh so wrong but oh so right. Thoroughly enjoyed the banter with Keir. This game is the whole package. Well done!
Genuinely one of the best VNs I've ever played, and I've played quite a fair amount. Literally made an account to comment this haha. The storytelling, the scenery, the artwork, everything is so well done and even months after my initial download of the demo, I'm still thinking about this game! Incredible work, and I can't wait to see where this goes.
A perfect mix of suspense, thrill, and mystery! A masterpiece of a game, the developers have so much to be proud of. Big fan!! ^^
Hi! We have a little guide in pdf form that you can download, helpfully called Ending Guide, if you're looking for a step-by-step walkthrough. Otherwise, our advice is pretty simple: the easiest way to get Cirrus' good ending is to be a total simp.
i am so invested into the story it's so EXCITING <33 the whole game is incredible! i am looking forward to seeing more :)) this is well made and i adore the story and characters <3
Played this a few days ago and it was absolutely amazing! spent a good hour or two doing both of the routes and trying to get the good endings. IM ANTICIPATING WITH SWEATING HANDS FOR WHEN THE NEXT ROUTE COMES OUT OR EVEN THE FULL GAME
I love the world you've created! It's so interesting. The music, characters, art... I loved it all.
While I enjoyed both routes, Kier's route was definitely my favorite. Him and the MC had such natural chemistry, every interaction was a joy. I don't like quippy characters, but the mc's snarkiness felt different here. The nonplussed delivery was incredible and a large part why I enjoyed this route so much.
Can't wait to see how the story continues! The team as a whole did fantastic work.
I really enjoyed every character in this story especially our MC.
I'm curious to see what will happen next :O
Oh yea and it's important for the other players to really check out the trigger warnings and the age restriction because i think some ignored them (from reading some of the comments) and it's important to take care of yourself first and foremost!
I love this game so far!! I've done Kier's route twice now for both the good and bad ending, and I can't wait to explore the others. I also LOVE the MC and how expressive they are. The addition of the masks is also great because it allows you to truly imagine the MC however you want. Looking forward to more.
This was so fun to play! Played both routes and my favorite is Keir even though he's a douchebag. I really enjoyed the dynamic between Keir and Vesper. Vesper is so sassy and really clever, absoluetely loved their personality! One of the only things that kinda bothered me were how it felt like Vesper's personality kind of got watered down in Cirrus's route? Vesper is desperate for the ichor but in Cirrus's route it was like they were even more desperate, to the point of not even questioning Cirrus when he first offered help. They are suspicious but never question Cirrus unlike their behavior with Keir. But then again Keir did kidnap, blackmail and coerce them so maybe that's why they're more willing to get on his nerves. idk if this is a me thing or nah ¯\_(ツ)_/¯. Either way, looking forward to the fancy stranger and 2nd chapter~
Why do I choose the pronouns "she/her" but still feel like the characters perceive me as a gender-neutral being? Apparently, this is a problem in all games where you can choose your pronouns, but it doesn't even minimally affect the plot and the perception of the mc by other characters. I mean if I choose a feminine pronoun, then I would like to feel that other characters do see me as a woman. I wish the chosen pronouns weren't just a formality.
So according to you, being a woman means imposing a misogynistic gender role on her?It's unfortunate that you have such negative associations with the female sex. I, on the contrary, enjoy the fact that I'm a woman and I don't want to hide my feminine essence behind a mask, especially when I have chosen the "she/ her" pronouns. Or why then in the game they made it even possible to choose your pronouns, despite the fact that you're wearing a mask?
because the gender of the mc doesn't matter to the story, and the mask is a way to let people imagine the mc however they want rather that putting restrictions on the possible appearances. the mc in your story can still be female or not, the love interest don't care either way because it isn't the focus of the darn story.
Firstly, even if your face is masked, your voice will still be feminine or masculine.And the outlines of your body will still hint that you have either a feminine figure or a masculine-type figure. Sometimes you just have to look at a person's gait, and you can already guess what gender this person is.Therefore, wearing a mask cannot mean that you will be perceived as a gender-neutral being. There are many other aspects that indicate which gender a person belongs to. Secondly, doesn't my choice of pronoun in itself imply that I want to be perceived as a being of the gender whose pronoun I have chosen? If I choose "she/her", then I think it makes sense that I want the characters to perceive me as a woman and treat me as one.
what is up with you calling all the nb fellas gender-neutral BEINGS, we're people just like any man or woman and the characters in the game treat us as such. there are plenty games with cis women as mc's, but this one isn't one of them. the mc doesn't have a specific gender but does have a personality that doesn't need to correspond to the pronouns chosen by the player and besides, it's pronouns=gender and people can use any pronouns despite their appearance or gender.
I didn't talk about you.I talked about MY OWN feelings and how the choice of pronouns makes me feel in the story. Yes, I'm a bit disturbed that after choosing feminine pronouns, I still continue to feel like a gender-neutral person/being ("being" is just a synonym for "person" so calm your sh!t). I think it would be the same for you if you chose "they/them" pronouns and other characters were treating you like a lady, for example. And you're wrong about the mc not having a specific gender. Perhaps you skipped biology classes or forgot which pronouns refer to which gender? It is logical that a person who identifies themselves as a man chooses masculine pronouns, and a person who identifies themselves as a woman chooses feminine pronouns. And the one who considers themselves nb choses "they/them". All other combinations just don't make sense.
Why, for example, would a person who identifies himself as a man choose feminine pronouns? To confuse others? What would be the point of this?
lmao no people can use whatever pronouns they want despite how they present themselves, gender is not defined by pronouns you moron. there are no f*cking points in what pronouns you’re using besides it feeling comfortable for you.
you aren’t choosing mcs gender you’re choosing how others refer to you in the game. and if the main character in the story was a woman (as they usually are in dating sims) i would not be complaining about it because then the game wasn’t meant for me to put myself into that character. it is a different thing with characters which gender isn’t relevant in the story and isn’t specified, because it allows both nbs and other genders to put themselves into without any restriction. gender neutrality isn’t about invalidating YOUR gender identity its about allowing as many different gender identifying people to have a game where they can play as a character that doesn’t have standard gender roles pushed into them.
(also being and person aren’t synonyms, while being a person does imply that you’re a being, calling someone a being doesn’t necessarily mean that the being is a person, this is just a very insensitive wording and yes i am indeed offended by it whenever you meant it well or not)
I think it goes more along with the "diversity" and your interpertation of your mc, it might not fit your taste, but adding a lot of descriptions just to fit the pronouns might give the creator more work to do (via, coding wise). Plus, it's up to them if they're willing to add it or not. There are other games with more in depth that is in touch with pronouns and sexuality, that is out there too.
I've just bought the game and played for a bit. The settings and vibes really intriguing so far! I love the atmosphere so much. Too bad that 'Fancy stranger' haven't have his own route yet and that discourages me from finishing current chapter a bit (He seems to be my type and I wanna pursue him so much!) I will wait for the updates, keep up good work^^!
this is such a fun and interesting story ur cooking up lol.. the art is really lovely and im A HUGE FAN of the . idk lore? the masks, the gods, the market itself. its really really fun. the art and music are really pretty, and the writing has a distinct tone and style to it that suits the atmosphere nicely. the interactions between vesper and keir are so cute and dynamic - and vespers internal dialogue, especially their distrust, adds a really neat level to those interactions, as well as with other characters.
anyways. really looking forward to seeing more of this :-)
wow! this is one of the most unique visual novels i've ever played! i'm glad i got to play this.
i normally don't write reviews but i just had to for this one. i'm particularly astounded by the world-building and how you managed to come up with the MC without them being skewed to one specific gender. as someone who is queer, i found this very smart and was happy :)
the characters are very lovely as well. cirrus was my favorite from the two so far; i really love dark themes haha. but i'm curious about the fancy-looking stranger because i'm already drawn to him just from the cameo! it was also refreshing to see a talkative and sarcastic MC.
i believe i also got all endings. this is not something you probably did intentionally, but i found myself chuckling over some of the bad endings (SPOILER: like "cirrus got bored of you" or "you ran your mouth too much"). it's like saying f*ck around and find out, which suits this adventure(?)-style genre and adds a charm to the game. i guess to simply say, the consequences of the choices the player makes are quite quirky.
one last thing: the writing style is Amazing. it's playful yet serious and colloquial yet eloquent. i'm also a writer and an avid reader who often gets picky about how a story is written, so this was rather superb and unique. world building is indeed one of the hardest elements to write (esp. in fantasy, dystopia, etc. genres) and i just think you neatly had it down.
i'll be following obscura closely! thank you for such a beautiful game :)
THIS WAS SOOOO GOOD, CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE OF IT!!! I loved both routes, and it's so nice of you to put an aftercare thing-y for people who might feel bad. The music, the backgrounds and the character designs are AMAZING, and the story seem really interesting, with charismatic characters. Do you have any intents to put the game on Steam? I'd love to put it in my wishlist if yes!! Otherwise, I'd be glad to accompany it by itch.io or have any other way. :)
I adore the characterization and world building in this game! The small details like most places not having rooms underground are really nice touches, and the MC has a discernible personality rather than being a self-insert.
The aftercare screen is also an excellent edition. Cirrus' scenes are fascinating, but they did make me feel a bit uncomfy - not the BDSM so much as the MC isn't in much of a position to have a say in the situation, regardless of whether he wants it or not - so it's nice to be provided with a break when I need it.
I read all the comments about Cirrus and was very confused, now I understand. But for real, its a great game i especially love how the MC isn't a pick me or clingy but sassy. Also both the ML are pretty interesting. I wonder about the masked stranger and what his future role will be.
I absolutely loved it, the protagonist isn't cringy and weird, the characters are perfect, the backgrounds, art, and music is awesome! and the aftercare is so sweet, thank you so much! can't wait for more!
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Got the good endings as the first one for each MC. At first I kinda hate Keir but he kept getting better and now I really like him and for Cirrus I didn't expect that scene at all it caught me off guard but his hotness is kinda off the chart so still love him tho. And, the fancy stranger I hope we will see more of him soon in the next chapter. Overall, this VN is fantastic I absolutely love it.
I got a bad ending and left it because there was so much story to the game. I was entranced by the writing though and the dynamics between the characters were written well. There was a lot descriptions on the settings it really helped me picture my surroundings. Nice Visual Novel! I hope to play the other ones!
the art, story, choices and endings (as well as the aftercare?!) of this game are all amazing i love obscura so much and cant wait for chapter two! :D
i love everything abt this game! the artstyle, the muic, the characters and story line!!! cant wait for more content to come :D
I just finished chapter 1 and I'll say it's amazing! You cannot find any super-hot masked men anywhere else, not in visual novels!
I'm actually really enjoying this. From the choice of gender to the "Aftercare" zone and the addition of a safeword, this game was amazing to play especially since you provided a space to tab out if needed. I cannot wait for more instalments.
I'm THIS CLOSE )( to dedicating taylor swift songs to keir fr . I miss him
Aaaaaaaa it's so addicted!! I love Keir so much till I dreamed of him TvT I write the date of next update on my calendar so I can download it as fast as I can!! Keep the good work for this amazing masterpiece! I love u all developers!!!!
Loving it so far! Will there be future upgrades or is the Demo all we get?
You know when you're in the mood for something and you can't quite place your finger on what but nothing you find is quite it? And you spend hours searching and find nothing? Yes well Obscura for me was that except I found Exactly what I was looking for. I am currently in the middle of the first love interest of my first playthrough and already had to stop just to sing my praises.
First of all, from the get-go the artstyle, music, and ambiance is absolutely stunning. The setting is this dark fantasy marketplace with religious undertones. I am looking forward to seeing the developments of the world.
The pacing and transitions of the story feel very natural as well. I feel like a lot of visual novel games, especially otome ones can be somewhat obvious in terms of like "THIS IS AN IMPORTANT CHOICE" where you can clearly tell when a choice is going to deviate the path one way or another. While this is sometimes helpful, I really love how natural the choices feel.
In a similar vein, as many people in these comments have mentioned, the MC is wonderful. I think they feel very natural and have realistic reactions to situations they are placed in. Again, many visual novel otome games can struggle with making likable and natural protagonists.
Finally, the progression of the relationships. Once again, just remarkably well-written and paced. Nice and slow, I like that they don't immediately start out in love with each other (I am a sucker for slower burns) and that the story takes time to build the relationships. I also love a bit of toxicity in fictional relationships so I look forward to seeing some darker themes throughout.
Basically, this is a stunningly beautiful and well-written game that honestly deserves better than being called an otome. And this is just how I feel after about an hour of playing. If you are a fan of dark fantasy, religious themes, slow burn, and romance than I really cannot recommend this game enough.
Edit upon finishing a few endings:
I very rarely try and achieve every single ending in a game the way I am trying to here. I think it really speaks to the quality of the game.
A few other notes, I really appreciate the various aftercare resources both in and out of game, especially in regards to Cirrus's route. (Although for personal preference I do find it somewhat immersion breaking but I understand the necessity for it for those that may need it, and it wasn't distracting enough to stop me from playing through his routes several times so I still consider it a good choice overall)
So far my only complaint is entirely in personal preference where honestly I think Cirrus's routes could go even darker but I'm an enjoyer of pretty dark fiction and understand it isn't for everyone. Just overall an amazing game with so much effort and creativity put into it. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.
This was a beautiful game and I loved how well the characters were written and how desperate the main character is for the lunar ichor.
I quite literally created an account just to type this (though I probably should have a lot sooner)- this game (even though it's only just released one chapter) was fantastic. I loved the way MC was presented as a character with clear traits and motivations. The world-building is beautiful- the plot premise is so interesting and unique. Honestly, this might be one of the best introductions to a game, in general, I've seen in a while- kudos to the writers, developers, artists, etc. because everything was executed great.
The aftercare section (spoilers about that I guess?) is something I'd even be using outside of the game- it felt so warm and comforting, and having the MC speak affirmations and break the 4th wall when I expected to be booted out of the game was quite frankly something I haven't seen before and really helped my panicking.
I also realized even with ONE chapter how attached I grew to my MC.This was so considerate and kind- thank you so much for putting this in here because even if someone (like me) thinks they know what to expect sometimes taking a step back is better. This is one of the best games I've seen in a long time, absolutely fantastic I am so excited for what is to come <3I'm very glad I found this. Loved both routes tho I'm a bit more intrigued by Cirrus' story. (Fancy stranger will probably end up being my favorite tho, I know what I like). I often crave darker games but they almost always tend to be a little *too* much for me, but this one is just perfect.
Almost forgot to add, but my favorite thing about this game so far is the MC. They're just delightful.
Can't wait to play the demo for the other love interests.
(Simp alert incoming-) Oh my gOD THIS WAS SUCH AN EXPERIENCE WHKRHKSHKSJS!!!!! The art is beautiful and the music fits perfectly without feeling out of place at all. The atmosphere is just so sick and I love the world and the way there's an option for a safeword and aftercare. Cirrus' route had me holding my breath, but KIER'S ROUTE??? Top tier. Spent the first five play throughs staring at his arms. Banter. Cool full face mask. Dried fruit. What more could you ask for?
ALSO Vesper?? MVP MC of all time. I loved their narrative voice and how they interacted with the other characters. Kinda wish I knew their name before I began the play through (so I could've given them their canon name) but at the same time, playing the MC as a different name than Vesper made them really feel like their own character? And that made the aftercare feel a lot more comforting somehow. Anyway! 10/10 game
I love MC for their humor, for how cute and talkative they are. Honestly, this has to be the best MC that I ever saw in any VN. Also simping so haaard for Mr. Thief, I need more of him so bad T_T Will be waiting patiently for more updates for as long as it needs, this game truly deserves all the wait!
Amazing writing coupled with pretty art and pretty UI. I love it!
Wow, loved it. Captivating writing, dynamic sprites, shadowy art, on point programming, wicked background music. Got Cirrus first - oh so wrong but oh so right. Thoroughly enjoyed the banter with Keir. This game is the whole package. Well done!
Genuinely one of the best VNs I've ever played, and I've played quite a fair amount. Literally made an account to comment this haha. The storytelling, the scenery, the artwork, everything is so well done and even months after my initial download of the demo, I'm still thinking about this game! Incredible work, and I can't wait to see where this goes.
A perfect mix of suspense, thrill, and mystery! A masterpiece of a game, the developers have so much to be proud of. Big fan!! ^^
Beautiful Game a Swimming Story ❤
Get the good end of Keir without guide curse I'm satisfactory !!
I LOVE CIRRUS！he is so sexy!
and his strap makes me crazy, I remember a film called Fifty Shads Of Grey, I think I couldn't sleep after reading his dialogues.
HOW DO I GET THE GOOD ENDING FOR CIRUSSSS
Hi! We have a little guide in pdf form that you can download, helpfully called Ending Guide, if you're looking for a step-by-step walkthrough. Otherwise, our advice is pretty simple: the easiest way to get Cirrus' good ending is to be a total simp.
Happy gaming! 🦝
i am so invested into the story it's so EXCITING <33 the whole game is incredible! i am looking forward to seeing more :)) this is well made and i adore the story and characters <3
Played this a few days ago and it was absolutely amazing! spent a good hour or two doing both of the routes and trying to get the good endings. IM ANTICIPATING WITH SWEATING HANDS FOR WHEN THE NEXT ROUTE COMES OUT OR EVEN THE FULL GAME
I love the world you've created! It's so interesting. The music, characters, art... I loved it all.
While I enjoyed both routes, Kier's route was definitely my favorite. Him and the MC had such natural chemistry, every interaction was a joy. I don't like quippy characters, but the mc's snarkiness felt different here. The nonplussed delivery was incredible and a large part why I enjoyed this route so much.
Can't wait to see how the story continues! The team as a whole did fantastic work.
I really enjoyed every character in this story especially our MC.
I'm curious to see what will happen next :O
Oh yea and it's important for the other players to really check out the trigger warnings and the age restriction because i think some ignored them (from reading some of the comments) and it's important to take care of yourself first and foremost!
Take care^^
Keir is hot! I've laughed multiple times uwu more Keir pleasee
aaah i cant wait to see what happens next! i love the setting you've created (the masks are such a nice touch). perfection. (kier i love you)
I love this game so far!! I've done Kier's route twice now for both the good and bad ending, and I can't wait to explore the others. I also LOVE the MC and how expressive they are. The addition of the masks is also great because it allows you to truly imagine the MC however you want. Looking forward to more.
This was so fun to play! Played both routes and my favorite is Keir even though he's a douchebag. I really enjoyed the dynamic between Keir and Vesper. Vesper is so sassy and really clever, absoluetely loved their personality! One of the only things that kinda bothered me were how it felt like Vesper's personality kind of got watered down in Cirrus's route? Vesper is desperate for the ichor but in Cirrus's route it was like they were even more desperate, to the point of not even questioning Cirrus when he first offered help. They are suspicious but never question Cirrus unlike their behavior with Keir. But then again Keir did kidnap, blackmail and coerce them so maybe that's why they're more willing to get on his nerves. idk if this is a me thing or nah ¯\_(ツ)_/¯. Either way, looking forward to the fancy stranger and 2nd chapter~
Apart from that the game looks really divine! I like its dark atmosphere and kinky vibes :)
Why do I choose the pronouns "she/her" but still feel like the characters perceive me as a gender-neutral being? Apparently, this is a problem in all games where you can choose your pronouns, but it doesn't even minimally affect the plot and the perception of the mc by other characters. I mean if I choose a feminine pronoun, then I would like to feel that other characters do see me as a woman. I wish the chosen pronouns weren't just a formality.
So according to you, being a woman means imposing a misogynistic gender role on her? It's unfortunate that you have such negative associations with the female sex. I, on the contrary, enjoy the fact that I'm a woman and I don't want to hide my feminine essence behind a mask, especially when I have chosen the "she/ her" pronouns. Or why then in the game they made it even possible to choose your pronouns, despite the fact that you're wearing a mask?
Just a thought for you ;)because the gender of the mc doesn't matter to the story, and the mask is a way to let people imagine the mc however they want rather that putting restrictions on the possible appearances. the mc in your story can still be female or not, the love interest don't care either way because it isn't the focus of the darn story.
Firstly, even if your face is masked, your voice will still be feminine or masculine. And the outlines of your body will still hint that you have either a feminine figure or a masculine-type figure. Sometimes you just have to look at a person's gait, and you can already guess what gender this person is. Therefore, wearing a mask cannot mean that you will be perceived as a gender-neutral being. There are many other aspects that indicate which gender a person belongs to.
Secondly, doesn't my choice of pronoun in itself imply that I want to be perceived as a being of the gender whose pronoun I have chosen? If I choose "she/her", then I think it makes sense that I want the characters to perceive me as a woman and treat me as one.
what is up with you calling all the nb fellas gender-neutral BEINGS, we're people just like any man or woman and the characters in the game treat us as such. there are plenty games with cis women as mc's, but this one isn't one of them. the mc doesn't have a specific gender but does have a personality that doesn't need to correspond to the pronouns chosen by the player and besides, it's pronouns=gender and people can use any pronouns despite their appearance or gender.
I didn't talk about you. I talked about MY OWN feelings and how the choice of pronouns makes me feel in the story. Yes, I'm a bit disturbed that after choosing feminine pronouns, I still continue to feel like a gender-neutral person/being ("being" is just a synonym for "person" so calm your sh!t).
I think it would be the same for you if you chose "they/them" pronouns and other characters were treating you like a lady, for example.
And you're wrong about the mc not having a specific gender. Perhaps you skipped biology classes or forgot which pronouns refer to which gender?
It is logical that a person who identifies themselves as a man chooses masculine pronouns, and a person who identifies themselves as a woman chooses feminine pronouns. And the one who considers themselves nb choses "they/them".
All other combinations just don't make sense.
Why, for example, would a person who identifies himself as a man choose feminine pronouns? To confuse others? What would be the point of this?
lmao no people can use whatever pronouns they want despite how they present themselves, gender is not defined by pronouns you moron. there are no f*cking points in what pronouns you’re using besides it feeling comfortable for you.
you aren’t choosing mcs gender you’re choosing how others refer to you in the game. and if the main character in the story was a woman (as they usually are in dating sims) i would not be complaining about it because then the game wasn’t meant for me to put myself into that character. it is a different thing with characters which gender isn’t relevant in the story and isn’t specified, because it allows both nbs and other genders to put themselves into without any restriction. gender neutrality isn’t about invalidating YOUR gender identity its about allowing as many different gender identifying people to have a game where they can play as a character that doesn’t have standard gender roles pushed into them.
(also being and person aren’t synonyms, while being a person does imply that you’re a being, calling someone a being doesn’t necessarily mean that the being is a person, this is just a very insensitive wording and yes i am indeed offended by it whenever you meant it well or not)
I think it goes more along with the "diversity" and your interpertation of your mc, it might not fit your taste, but adding a lot of descriptions just to fit the pronouns might give the creator more work to do (via, coding wise). Plus, it's up to them if they're willing to add it or not. There are other games with more in depth that is in touch with pronouns and sexuality, that is out there too.
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I've just bought the game and played for a bit. The settings and vibes really intriguing so far! I love the atmosphere so much. Too bad that 'Fancy stranger' haven't have his own route yet and that discourages me from finishing current chapter a bit (He seems to be my type and I wanna pursue him so much!) I will wait for the updates, keep up good work^^!
this is such a fun and interesting story ur cooking up lol.. the art is really lovely and im A HUGE FAN of the . idk lore? the masks, the gods, the market itself. its really really fun. the art and music are really pretty, and the writing has a distinct tone and style to it that suits the atmosphere nicely. the interactions between vesper and keir are so cute and dynamic - and vespers internal dialogue, especially their distrust, adds a really neat level to those interactions, as well as with other characters.
anyways. really looking forward to seeing more of this :-)
Hot thief and a kinky priest IM OBSESSED. I really love the mature themes and I can't wait for the next update <3
wow! this is one of the most unique visual novels i've ever played! i'm glad i got to play this.
i normally don't write reviews but i just had to for this one. i'm particularly astounded by the world-building and how you managed to come up with the MC without them being skewed to one specific gender. as someone who is queer, i found this very smart and was happy :)
the characters are very lovely as well. cirrus was my favorite from the two so far; i really love dark themes haha. but i'm curious about the fancy-looking stranger because i'm already drawn to him just from the cameo! it was also refreshing to see a talkative and sarcastic MC.
i believe i also got all endings. this is not something you probably did intentionally, but i found myself chuckling over some of the bad endings (SPOILER: like "cirrus got bored of you" or "you ran your mouth too much"). it's like saying f*ck around and find out, which suits this adventure(?)-style genre and adds a charm to the game. i guess to simply say, the consequences of the choices the player makes are quite quirky.
one last thing: the writing style is Amazing. it's playful yet serious and colloquial yet eloquent. i'm also a writer and an avid reader who often gets picky about how a story is written, so this was rather superb and unique. world building is indeed one of the hardest elements to write (esp. in fantasy, dystopia, etc. genres) and i just think you neatly had it down.
i'll be following obscura closely! thank you for such a beautiful game :)
THIS WAS SOOOO GOOD, CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE OF IT!!!
I loved both routes, and it's so nice of you to put an aftercare thing-y for people who might feel bad.
The music, the backgrounds and the character designs are AMAZING, and the story seem really interesting, with charismatic characters.
Do you have any intents to put the game on Steam? I'd love to put it in my wishlist if yes!! Otherwise, I'd be glad to accompany it by itch.io or have any other way. :)
I adore the characterization and world building in this game! The small details like most places not having rooms underground are really nice touches, and the MC has a discernible personality rather than being a self-insert.
The aftercare screen is also an excellent edition. Cirrus' scenes are fascinating, but they did make me feel a bit uncomfy - not the BDSM so much as the MC isn't in much of a position to have a say in the situation, regardless of whether he wants it or not - so it's nice to be provided with a break when I need it.
I read all the comments about Cirrus and was very confused, now I understand. But for real, its a great game i especially love how the MC isn't a pick me or clingy but sassy. Also both the ML are pretty interesting. I wonder about the masked stranger and what his future role will be.
I absolutely loved it, the protagonist isn't cringy and weird, the characters are perfect, the backgrounds, art, and music is awesome! and the aftercare is so sweet, thank you so much! can't wait for more!